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Borrow somebody's dream II

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...til tomorrow.

Model: Ana :heart:



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Image size
608x803px 320.04 KB
Make
PENTAX
Model
PENTAX K200D
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
90 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Apr 7, 2010, 4:12:16 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think this was a great picture - great lighting, great pose, great framing.

THe only issue that I have (and this is extremely distracting to me) are the huge green blobs in the bottom half of the photo. I'm unsure if that was a branch or plant you wanted to put in to help frame her face . . .the position, tho, almost obscures part of the face. While it does frame her, it feels like it framing her in a negative sense. It's kinda a "Aww, I wish I could see her without the green blobs, let me try to look around them to see what I can make out" kind of effect for me.


Hope that helps!